There are several reason to like this short story. The imagery is striking: you can picture everything perfectly in your head. This story reminds you that Doms are not perfect or psychic, but fallible human beings. It also reminds you that communication runs both ways in any relationship and is an integral part of whether they work or fail. It's important to remember why you have entered into a relationship (of any kind) with someone else. There are needs to be met on both sides and you should care about that. This is the story of two pivotal events in a man's life that we, the audience, are voyeurs into.